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A devil's cry is a terrifying sound to hear. Even if the creature is coming from this painted stud. Returning to Dawn once again he arrives at Mysterious Ruins in high hopes of taking this land as his own. After hearing that the once lead King disappeared from the lands. Did he decide that being a king was to much hard work? Pft. What could go wrong? Well another stallion wanting to take this position as well. Never. Dare take and this painted stallion will have your head ripped off for good. Muscles rippled beneath the spotted hide as the demon within moved with a graceful stride entering the Pagan land of non-believers. Oh that's what he became. Living among the Gods for so long and losing someone dear to him to a worthless stallion. Oh yes he despised that stallion so dearly. But it didn't matter to him no more. His heart blackened more, his soul dying to the deceased. Not even his mother would want to talk to her son who left the only life he grew up in. And the plot that she and the past Queen had decided upon for him and Laioni to become leaders.

Like that didn't happen. The son of the past favorable stallion of the King and Queen took the throne beside her. Banner shook in high ridicule of what this world has become. Thoughts of killing those that follow the Gods circled within his mind. A devil smile appeared upon his facade as Kamen came to a steady halt smack dab in the middle of Mysterious Ruins . Front limbs lifted off the ground as dirt and grass was kicked into the air. Terrifying screams escaped the stallion's voicebox warning off peasants and worthless pests that a new Rogue King has taken over. A sneer smile appeared upon his lips once more as the stallion came back to earth with a loud thud. Mere thoughts of harming those on the outside of Middle Earth kept him going. Kamenwati stood upon the hill of his home near the edge where water is set between the two worlds. Thorns sliced back upon his skull as he released a harsh snort. Mark my words believers. Your time will come to destruction. The stallion hissed.

Turning away from the believers Kingdom, the painted stallion head downhill moving about the lands leaving his scent to ward off trespassing stallions. Even if they mean to take what's now rightfully his. Skull lifted high in a dominate manner with tail raised as he makes each stride powerful and wicked. Nothing shall stand in his way. Not even unknown creatures. Pity how one such as him was a low life centered stallion trying to win the new princess' heart and being torn to pieces when she picks another to be her king. Well does he look like a low life stallion now? No, he doesn't even look like the same stallion that everyone once knew. Arriving at the middle of the lands skull turned every which way as two dark liquids scanned the area for any unwanted travelers. Seeing/hearing none approach dial lowered as he grazed peacefully upon the lush grass below.

A sudden snap sent the stallion on high alert as eyes searched for the source while thorns listened for the sound of where it came from. A rough snort was given warning off whoever is approaching him. Being a Pagan/Rogue King you would be on high alert now that the throne to Mysterious Ruins has been taken. Especially by someone like him. Who dares to enter without my permission? Icy deadly tones escaped the stallions voicebox as skull lifted in an aggressive manner.



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« Reply #1 on Aug 7, 2008, 10:48pm »

I lurked in the shadows for some time, watching with a grim determination that had suddenly spawned itself in my gut. My hazel eyes darted and flashed, always staring and studying. Nares flaring, I narrowed my eyes slightly, allowing both to carefully determine the level of threats that were presented while I was here. True, Kamen was now a Pagan. And because of this, I was not sure exactly...what to expect. Would Kamen behave himself? Or react to me as an enemy. Yes, I suppose he has a right to be. But none the less, I did not want him to challenge me to a fight I did not have the heart for. And then there was always the case that I did not know where Kamen's sanity was. He had left Dawn for a short time, but things happen sometimes, and not always for the best. And yet, as I watched from the shadows, he did not let on that he was insane. So I took a chance.

I was nearly considering turning around and leaving, but before I could do so, my presence was detected. With an annoyed flick of my tail, I neatly lifted my hooves and stepped from the shadowy foliage. A tight grin decorated my beautiful face as I met Kamen's eyes. Still unsure of his actions, I traveled in a wide circle around him. Though I allowed myself to act casual and nonchalant, I was on full alert, keeping my eyes on him at all times. Parting my lips, I let chilly words slip through.

So, Kamen, I see that you are a Pagan now. You never were much of a stayer. But I see you have done somewhat of a... decent job for yourself. King? Hmm.
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« Reply #2 on Aug 8, 2008, 12:30am »

A sneer smile appeared upon his kissers as the site of a dappled figure slithered out of the shadows. So Laioni decided to come pay him a visit huh. Dark liquids of nothingness followed her every move as she circled him leaving a nice decent wide circle. Come to visit without your little king following close behind? The stallion sneered as he shifted his weight standing in a casual state. Though his guard never disappeared. Skull lifted as nares flared catching the strong stench of the new king upon her coat. A disgusted taste was forming in the pit of his stomach and tried to release itself into the world, but the stallion wouldn't allow it. Never show another your feelings. Even if they are stil there in the back of his mind. His heart felt nothing neither did his soul. Body shifted blocking her from making any more movements to move around him. The nearest place to keep her from moving was inside one of the ruined structures.

What made you decide to come to Mysterious Ruins your highness? The last part was in a sarcastic tone. This time he moved in a circle around her. Brushing his side up against her's giving the new king a nice scream. If he can find one. A devil chuckle escaped his voicebox as the Pagan Emperor sifted out of the way if she decided to strike after he brushed a small scent upon her. Thorns sliced back upon his skull before disappearing out from the structure and out in the fog. Disappearing from the dark goddess herself. Halting he turned in the direction of which he came and released a devil cry. Releasing the cries of those wondering the grounds of his home. No wonder they called it Mysterious Ruins. For they can hear the sheer cries/screams of the undead.

Dear Laioni, did you honestly think I'd be happy to see your face again? After you tore my cold black heart from my body. And giving yourself up just like that to another. Words of hate poured from the kings lips. Slowly the insanity began to form as thorns sliced back then flicked forwards. Pity wouldn't even begin to discribe what Kamen has seen in the past. A devil smile appeared upon his lips as he moved forwards lurking in the thick fog. Dare think that you can trespass again and bring that king of yours upon my domain. Dare try and both will parish. My time of living as a low life stallion always trying to win your heart, but never one to lose to another. A snarl escaped his lips as a powerful stride ripped the grass right out of their roots. As he headed straight for Laioni in a deadly movement. Insane was he? Indeed he is. Insane to move in a deadly swift towards the Dark Queen herself. Normally he's not all that bold to just rush right to her. But if your on his land, watch your back. Or front to be exact. Coming to a sudden and quick halt standing just 3 inches from her. A swift flick of the tassel was given in irritation. What did you really come here for Laioni? There had to be a reason if you dared to cross the bridge to the middle earth. A silent chill of words escaped his lips as he waited for her response.
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« Reply #3 on Aug 9, 2008, 1:25am »

For several moments I circled the beast before me, my strides smooth and without falter. But when he had the nerve to step in my path, I pinned my ears and curled my lips. I looked upon him with the same distain as I would feces clinging to my hooves. Few were so bold as to behave like this, to me at least. Who the hell did they think they were? And who the hell did they think I was? But I lost my firm face for only a moment, and quickly I recovered, not showing that I was bothered by his actions. But when he dared slink up to me and smear his reeking stunch upon my hide, I drew back from him, my words spat through lips that trembled with anger and disbelief.

Your boldness is folly, bastard. And I assure you, it will get you killed if you do not stay in line. If you are dwelling in the fact that I am here alone in your land, then I urge you to think of things less ambitious.

My icy words were hurled from my throat in a voice that I fought to keep control of, and barely managed. Perhaps Kamen had gone insane. But I doubted he would be stupid. His was a new nation, one that I doubted would stand any chance against the dark army. I had in fact contemplated the notion of becoming the Non Believers ally. But once word reached me that Kamen was at the helm, I began to have doubts. If I could set aside my differences, which was like the odds of an ice storm in hell, I doubted Kamen would do the same. In his eyes, I was nothing more then a tease who had flaunted it, and then given it to someone else. Sorry sport, but I guess you just weren't up to the game. None, not even you or Shiva, know the true secrets of the cold withered object that is my heart.

Reason? Huh, I would rather explain myself to a field mouse then the likes of you. Perhaps to see if the rumors were true; that you had indeed claimed this throne. I see that they are. But don't threaten me. Don't you ever threaten me. And I don't give a damn who's land I'm on. You wouldn't have the balls to harm or take advantage of me.
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« Reply #4 on Aug 10, 2008, 5:38pm »

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« Reply #5 on Oct 11, 2008, 5:49pm »

sry for the wait. it's coming.
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